writing skills - anecdotes |
What is an anecdote?
An anecdote is a short and interesting story
taken from a person's past experience - or that of someone they know or have heard
about. For your exam, of course, your own anecdotes will need to be imaginary - made up (but
they must still be entirely believable and relevant).
Why are anecdotes useful?
It is a
simple fact of life that we enjoy hearing interesting stories. No one knows why, but we do.
Certainly, we enjoy relating to and learning from stories - and we often can
identify with the characters in them.
If you choose to use a short anecdote in your own writing (and you should give it serious consideration), it will engage, involve and interest your reader in ways little else can; it will add a human and personal dimension that can be irresistible and fascinating.
But anecdotes need to be believable and lively - and they can also be very emotional; and because anecdotes are 'true' stories, they can be very convincing indeed, adding authority to what you write.
A well chosen, well told anecdote is a sure fire way to involve and persuade your reader.
How do you use an anecdote?
In 'Writing to Persuade'
For coursework or in the exam, make up a true-sounding story that shows how important your view is, or how other views are less well thought through.
Below is an example.
The exam question asks you to write an article to persuade your readers that homeless people suffer and need help but you know that many people have no sympathy for the homeless, maybe thinking they are lazy and don't want work or that the government help them out enough already with social security. So you make up an anecdote...
'I know that many of you think the homeless are a lost cause and that they are lazy good for nothings. Well, of course, that might be true for some of them, but let me tell you about Dave. I went to school with Dave for three years until Year 11. It was just before our exams when Dave's mum and dad hit problems - big-time! From there on in life began to fall apart for Dave. He just wasn't able to cope. By the time he was eighteen, when I was sitting for my A-levels, Dave was on the streets...'
In 'Writing a Story' or 'Writing to Entertain'
For coursework and exam you can create very fine stories
based upon incidents from your own life - events that have happened either to
you, or to someone you know. These need not be wholly truthful - they can be
simplified and dramatised to make them more interesting and engaging.
Going into your final exam with a repertoire of, say, four stories is an amazingly clever way to be well prepared for the exam. The chances are you will be able to adapt one of your stories to suit whatever titles are offered in the exam itself.
In 'Writing to Inform'
Remember that here the essay requires a lively and interesting tone that also offers a balanced view as it answers the 5W+H questions (what, when, where...). Anecdotes can be very useful here. For example, you could relate
two short anecdotes, each of which shows a different aspect of whatever you are informing your reader about. Then you can add in your own view to add
even more balance by giving a third viewpoint. Giving balanced
opinions and facts is a key aspect of writing to inform.
In 'Writing to Explain, Analyse, Review or
Comment'
This kind of writing often
needs to simplify and make clear a complex issue. By relating a personal story
that might act as a useful analogy, you can make your writing more interesting
and useful.
In 'Writing to Advise'
Advice needs care, but an anecdote can show how someone else faced up to or managed a particular situation.